Luke A Rogue

by **Lightheart** Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:25 pm

Luke

"It wasn't me who killed him, at least not this time."

Basic Information

Name: Luke
Age: 25 moons old
Gender: Male
Clan: Rogue (Claw's Group)
Rank: Rogue
Breed: Russian Breed

Family Information

Mother: Kinder (deceased)
Father: Lucas (deceased)
Grandmother(s): UNKNOWN
Grandfather(s): UNKNOWN
Siblings: He doesn't say
Younger Siblings: He doesn't say.
Mate: NONE
Crush: NONE
Pups: NONE
Bloodline: 100 % Rogue
Scent: Damp leaves

Appearance and Personality Information

Appearance:
He has a huge build and has amber eyes and his fur is darkened gray. He is slightly muscular and his body is lean and quick.

Personality:
Luke is a cruel, but stubborn tom and can be ticked off quite easily. He is also very impatient and cunning cat. He can be rather blunt and straight to the point. He is watchful and strong and can fight with cunning and speed. He can out-wit cats in battle but usually tries to use his brute strength.

Strengths:
His strength and cunningness

Weaknesses:

Getting hit in the eyes.

History and Relationships

History:

His life started on a crisp day in early leaf-bare. His mother took care of him until he was 5 and by then she abandoned him. His father, however, took over and turned him into a cruel young tom cat. He left his father after he was 17 moons old and wandered the Outlands until he found a young she-cat, who was older than him. He joined the little group she was making. He grew to like the group and soon hoped he could be the Second In Command.
Relationships

Respect: Claw
Crush:
Love:
Friend: NONE
Best friend: NONE
Neutral: Claw
Unsure: NONE
Dislike: The Clans
Hate: Lightstar (Including the other clan leaders)

by **Savy** Wed Feb 21, 2018 7:52 pm

Just a couple things,

1. Flesh out the personality/appearance. What build is he? Muscular, Thin? And give him some positive traits.

2. “Can easily overpower most cats” seems overpowered, change that.

3. Blue fur isn’t a thing, and no, Bluestar’s fur is gray.

Other than that, tag me when changed